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Task 2. Features of conclusions

Writing conclusions Th conclusion at the end f ur essay srvs numbr of functions: - It is th finl rt f ur text and so needs to ull together all the min ideas. - It should rfr back t what you outlined in ur introduction and to ur thesis statement. - It is n opportunity to show th extent to which u hv been to deal with th issues involved in ur thesis statement. Just like intrdtins, conclusions n hv numbr of features: 1. logical conclusion that is evident frm th development of the ideas in ur essay, as well as brif summr of the main ideas in the essay 2. comments these ideas 3. pedictions fr futur developments in the topic r r statement of furthr rsrh tht might b rquid 4. statement of th limitations f th wrk vrd b ur essay 5. rfrn back to th thesis statement first mentioned in the intrdutin

 

2.1 Study the example conclusion below from the project of a student. Complete column 1 of the table below and on page 56 with the features 1-7 below.

Further research suggestions 2 limitations 3. comments on ideas 4. logical conclusion 5. predictions 6. brief summary 7. reference to thesis statement

Example

To what extent is bank borrowing the best choice for small and medium-sized enterprises raising funds in Vietnam?   This project has examined how the development of small and medium-sized businesses in the economic sector partly depends on financial management and financial decisions where choosing a suitable method to raise funds is crucial. The importance of a clear financial plan, understanding financial situations, and clarifying the advantages and disadvantage of each method has been discussed. Although there are a number of methods in capital markets for raising funds, borrowing from banks seems to be the best choice for small and medium-sized enterprises that want to expand. Despite the disadvantage of bank borrowing with high interest rates, and limits of borrowing, this essay has shown how bank borrowing is suitable for the business environment in Vietnam. This is because many businesses are family-run, with lack of management experience, but also because interest charges are deductible for such companies. The same lack of experience would make it difficult to venture into new capital markets, and currently, at least, bank loans are the most appropriate source of funding. As experience grows, however, and the depth of knowledge increases, it is important for these companies to consider other possible financial options.

 

 

Feature Relevant section of text
  _______________________________   _______________________________ Although there are a number of methods in capital markets for raising funds, borrowing from banks seems to be the best choice for small and medium-sized enterprises that want to expand.
  _______________________________     _______________________________ This project has examined how the development of small and medium-sized businesses in the economic sector partly depends on financial management and financial decisions where choosing a suitable method to raise funds is crucial. The importance of a clear financial plan, understanding financial situations, and clarifying the advantages and disadvantage of each method has been discussed.
  ______________________________     ______________________________ (.this essay has shown how bank borrowing is suitable for the business environment in Vietnam. This is because many businesses are family-run, with lack of management experience, but also because interest charges are deductible for such companies. The same lack of experience would make it difficult to venture into new capital markets, and currently, at least, bank loans are the most appropriate source of funding.
  As experience grows, however, and the depth of knowledge increases, it is important for these companies to consider other possible financial options.
  Not included
  Not included
  ____________________________ this essay has shown how bank borrowing is suitable for the business environment in Vietnam.

 



2.2 Conclusions 1-4 are also taken from the projects of students. They all contain some of the features, 1-7, in the list on page 55. Identify and highlight features from the list. Then write the numbers 1-7 in the margin beside the appropriate feature.

Conclusion 1

What role does the real estate property market play in the economy?

This essay has shown that the real estate market has different functions depending on whether the country involved has either a developing or developed economy. In general, real estate property is a national asset, and the real estate market is indispensable for national economic development. In China, where the real estate market is immature but growing rapidly, the national economy is more dependent on this market with its potential for employment, and possibility of attracting capital. In this situation, and ultimately as the Chinese government is the largest investor, the real estate market can be considered the engine of change. In contrast, the real estate market in the USA is mature, involved in many sections of the economy, and individuals are the largest investors. It remains to be seen whether the development of the Chinese economy will have a significant impact on the real estate market, creating a situation more similar to that of the American model.

 

Source:Edited extract from authentic student material.

 

 

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