In this telex, Satex of Rome are telling their customer, F. Lynch & Co., that they cannot supply the sweaters they asked for in their order - DR 5871 - and want to know if they can replace this with sweaters of catalogue number N154. Notice the answerback and the collation.
341641 TRJMP
CANNOT SUPPLY ITEM R432 ON ORDER DRS871 BUT N154
AVAILABLE PLEASE CONFIRM ACCEPTANCE
SATEX ROME
R432DR5871N15 + ?
13.8.2
Acceptance of alternative supply
In their answer Lynch & Co. accept the alternative but want the terms confirmed.
285136MLJRC
N154 ACCEPTABLE ONLY ON SAME TERMS AS R432 NAMELY
33 0/0 DISC GIF
F LYNCH BIRMINGHAM
N154R4320/OCIF + ?
13.8.3
Instruction to stockbroker
Here is a telex from a client to his stockbroker asking him to buy shares on his behalf. Note the term at best, i.e. the best price the broker can obtain. Also, that a letter will follow.
881534LMTBD
BUY REPEAT BUY 3000 THREE THOUSAND UNION SHIPPING
AT BEST CONFIRMATION FOLLOWS
DALE PRESTON
3000 UNION SHIPPING + +
13.8.4
Advice of bank credit
Here is a bank advising their customer that money has been paid into his account. Note that TT means telegraphic transfer of money.
901737PNLTA
YOUR A/C CREDITED TT NINE HUNDRED AND EIGHTY
POUNDS STERLING
NATIONAL BANK OF JAPAN
980 POUNDS STERLING + +
13.8.5
Advice of shipment
This telex is from Lee Boatbuilders Ltd. Hong Kong, advising their customer, International Crafts, that their order is being shipped to them.
611531 DM RM Â
YOUR ORDER 90103 SHIPPED CLEAN ON BOARD S S ORIENT
SAILING 6 MAY OUR AGENTS FORWARDING DOCUMENTS TO
NORTHERN CITY BANK LETTER OF CONFIRMATION FOLLOWS
LEE BOATBUILDERS
90103 SS ORIENT + +
13.8.6
Shipbroker's advice
Telex from a shipbroker advising an exporter that a vessel is available for a time charter.
901174HMTPL
S TANAKA MARU NOW DOCKED IN HOUSTON AVAILABLE FOR SIX MONTHS VESSEL 5000 FIVE THOUSAND TONS HIRE 4 FOUR POUNDS STERLING PER TON TELEX ACCEPTANCE ALLIANCE SHIPBROKERS LONDON
MONTHS 5000 TONS 4 POUNDS STERLING PER TON + ?
13.8.7
Reply to shipbroker
This is a reply to 13.8.6. The 'Charter Party' is the contract for chartering a vessel. Notice the corrections in the telex.
857811TRLNP
CONFIRM ACCEPTANCE OF CHARTER FOR S S TINXXXXX TANAKA MARU SEND US CHIRXXXXX CHARTER PARTY HERDIS MANUFACTURING SLOUGH + +
13.9
Points to remember
1. The structure and presentation of a faxed letter should be much the same as that of an ordinary letter, but you must state clearly, at the top of the first page, the name of the person you wish to read it.
2. Many offices supply a fax lead sheet' which is fed into the machine as a first page, and which gives the receiver details about who the sender is, which company he/she represents, how many pages he/she is faxing, etc.
3. Both fax and email enable people to receive messages and important information immediately.
4. Companies are increasingly using fax and email in place of telex machines. However, remember that telexes, telegrams, and cables are still commonly used in some countries, especially outside Europe.
13.10
Words to remember
a fax
to fax (someone)
receiver's code
electronic mail
email
a modem
a mailbox
a visual display unit (VDU)
a telegram
to telegraph
a cable
to cable
a cable message
a telegraphic address
telegraphic transfer
telemessages
a telex
to telex
answerback
collation
14 Miscellaneous correspondence
Reservations; appointments; hospitality; letters of condolence and congratulations.
In this unit we look at some miscellaneous correspondence, much of which a secretary might deal with in a medium to large-size firm.
14.1
Reservations
Dear Sir,
This letter is to confirm our telephone conversation this morning when I arranged for two tickets to be sent to us in the names of P. R. Dell and B. Newsome, our directors, who will be travelling London Heathrow-Rome on flight BA 164 at 10.05 hours, on Wednesday 12 June.
Please send the tickets to us by return, and find a cheque for £210.00 enclosed.
Yours faithfully,
14.1.1
Air travel
Dear Sir,
With reference to my telephone call to you this morning, would you please book a return ticket including couchette in the name of Mr John Miles for London-Paris-Zagreb, leaving on Monday 18 July, and returning Zagreb-Paris-London, on 3 August?
Please could you reserve a seat in a non-smoking compartment?
I would appreciate your sending the tickets as soon as possible and have enclosed a cheque for £188.00.
Yours faithfully,
14.1.2
Train travel
14.1.3
Hotel
Dear Mr Ruggeno,
This letter is to confirm my telex and your answer of today in which you agreed to reserve two separate rooms with shower and bath, from 12 June to 21 June inclusive for Mr P.R. Dell and Mr B. Newsome, who will be attending the Textile Trade Fair in Rome.
Could you make sure that the rooms are situated at the back of the hotel, as the rooms they were given last year, overlooking the mam road, were rather noisy?
I am enclosing a banker's draft for £40.00 as a deposit. Could you please acknowledge receipt?